Look at the breakdown of lines per scene and people who are in those
scenes. We will cut some from two –
person scenes. This may be why scenes seem so slow.
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Scene 1
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Everyone 40 lines
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Scene 2
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Luis Monica 48 lines
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Scene 3
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Everyone 115 lines
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Scene 4
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Town, Eugenio, Belen, Moises 42 lines
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Scene 5
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Monica Luis 46 lines
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Scene 6
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Town, Belen, Moises, Eugenio 34 lines
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Scene 7
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Monica Luis 13
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Scene 8
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Miracles Eugenio, Town, Moises Luis, Monica 124 lines
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Scene 9
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Luis Monica 20 lines
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Scene 10
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Everyone 108 lines.
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Everyone
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React and keep going during the entire song. Ramzi, think of something that you can do
on your own.
Transitions are too slow.
More WASHING .
TRANSITION TO WAR IS SCARY
SHOW US WAR – dirtier maybe – different clothing? Add shawls, etc.? Turn skirts inside out
with handprints?
Work on accents.
Lines before the car transition must be stepped on.
Transition from first car scene to next scene didn’t flow.
Must have people noises during transitions.
Send me your names.
REMINDER – THERE ARE SACKS TO PUT ENCOURAGING NOTES IN IN THE HALL.
I STILL do not see master gestures.
Transition didn’t work after Belen and Moises take Ramzi into the
clinic.
THE BODY IS GONE! This is
huge. Maybe townspeople leave while
they get the body?
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Town
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Say lines to each other. Step
on each line. DICTION
Eugenio’s first line everyone unfreezes.
Loved the frozen people at the beginning – great stage picture.
Ramzi, you must be up front in the dance scene.
Breaking the radio – different feelings of disbelief – everyone is
not the same. Some are mad, some are sad, some are astonished, some pity
Moises.
More WATER USE – EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rehearse lines in dark so that every line is different.
Looking at Ramzi – some can’t, some hyperventilate. Different
reactions to Ramzi. You can be next.
Look more frightened. Kaytlyn
maybe almost screams and Alee puts hands over her mouth. Heavy breathing
during this scene.
Don’t all enter or leave at the same time.
Maybe one goes to Ramzi,s tarts to touch, and is led away – DO things
that make you different from everyone else.
During door knocking, it is your door they are knocking at. Look at the door. Mad at self because you
didn’t help.
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Carter
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Do not play with shutters. We need a frame for them. Look through and
react. Not enough reactions from you
throughout the show.
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Kaytlyn
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Please pick up the broken radio.
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Eugenio
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Knees are too far apart in car scene.
Don’t do the swiping – do a press – pressing hands together.
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Eugenio and Moises
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Straighten up.
2nd car scene had no energy. Moises, tilt the hat back.
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Guards/SOLDIERS
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Was that the real gun? Behind the scrim?
Give bad looks
Be more menacing.
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Moises
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Head up in the car scene.
Must see you knock on door.
Maybe put Ramzi down and Belen wipes his face, checks for temperature.
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Moises and Belen
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Great chemistry – work more on a loving relationship.
Look for danger in the cross. Moises, protect her.
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Belen
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I think you would have a washing machine. Have a pitcher where you drink water – look
at it.
Work more on the speech – slow it down. Mark each word on how you should say
it/them. You are mad at yourself that
you didn’t fight. Get mad – CHIPPED away.
There must be more life in this speech.
You are very emotional. After the speech, you become alive when Moises
agrees. Maybe stumble out following
Moises, you shriek and he tells you to be quiet – anything to add suspense.
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Monica and Luis
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First scene is too slow. We will
cut some. Have purpose in everything you do. Watch being too profile. Cheat
out to second and third judge.
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Luis
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Lines seemed too memorized.Loved your smirk.
Get in character behind the scrim.
Less is more. Get a can of
paint that is almost empty.
Coming in without finger, you cannot touch clothes line with right
hand.
Head up. You have great moments but they must be consistent. Be in character. Knife was good.
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Monica
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Lines seemed too memorized. Be more surprised that he is home.
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Music
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Good job
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Lights
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More blue at the beginning.
Wait for Eugenio’s or anyone’s last line before crossfading to
another scene.
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Guitar
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Thanks. The music is adding so
much.
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Stage lights
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Deeper blue at the beginning – may need to add blue and red.
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Lights, stage lights, and sound, guitar and singer
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Thank you for all you do.It’s hard.
You do not always know what we are doing down stage. You never complain and we do it over and
over again.
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Alee and Kaytlyn
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Are always involved – always thinking of what more they can do -
KUDOS
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Sunday, January 27, 2019
Sunday rehearsal January 27
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Nate Couto- We need to keep the townspeople out of the background when it’s Luis and Monica’s parts and keep quiet in the back so the audience doesn’t get distracted.
ReplyDeleteI think focusing on mine and Colin's one scene really helped. When we all put our heads together and focus on elevating one scene, it makes a huge difference. I think if we all watch each other's scene we can really help with ideas and adding new things in the scene. I know I could use help with my first scene, well all of them for a matter of fact. If anyone has any ideas please let me know.
ReplyDeleteI completely agree with cooper’s comment! I think we all need to help each other and critique each scene so we can make them stronger. I know we are trying to rush and get through the show but I really think this will make the show a lot stronger.
ReplyDeleteI will also make sure that the town stays quiet and stays out of each scene. It is just really hard since there is only so many places we can go. We can’t be in the clinic, the church or Moises and Belen’s house, or the front of the stage because we will be too noticeable. The only room we have is right by Monica and Luis house and behind Moises and Belen’s house. I think maybe we should have some of the town off between each scene so we won’t make as much noise or distracting. If anyone has any ideas where the town should go or do please let us no. It will really help if we had some ideas.
Seems like everyone memorized their lines, good job👍
ReplyDeleteThe show is getting there and yes we still need improvement. Our next clinic needs to be spot on! Hopefully all of the critics that we received will help us next time. I think that everyone needs to go over their lines and transitions. Keep it up guys!
ReplyDeleteI think we need to open our eyes to the fact that we are replaceable. I think we have gotten to this place where we forget that there are other people who would love our spots on stage and would do anything for them. If you do not wanna give the bare minimum (learn lines, blocking, learn basic characteristics)then go home because I am sick and tired of this show looking the way that it does. We are so much better than this but if we continue in this direction, we will be claiming alternate play at district (and that is if we are lucky). Also: the town competes as a unit, that means you guys will win awards together. That also means if ONE of y'all sucks then NONE of y'all get an award. Be a team, help each other out.
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